23rd + 30th October 2020 - 6th November. Script Writing (As Happy As Larry NOW Piss Taker)

23rd + 30th October 2020 - 6th November. Script Writing

23/10/2020 Task- Write the first two pages of your script

30/10/2020 Task- Redraft first two pages or do the next two

6/11/2020 Task- Finish the script

I decided to just go ahead and write it all by the 30th of October With minor adjustments inspired by group crits. Here it is. 

As Happy As Larry. 

At the crit there was a comment which was that my story was like an M Night film. It was the ending, it was stupid. I have totally changed the plot since. By the 6th of November i had changed it into a revenge story where larry gets Daniel back for bullying him at school. Here it is. 

As Happy As Larry Redraft 

Paul suggested i upped the stakes a little but only slightly. Apart from that it's done.